You must login (register) to review.
Reviewer: xNymphadoraX Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/27/2007 09:11 AM Title: Being Helpful

It's always great to see another Fred/Angelina story. They really don't get enough attention in canon or fandom. I loved the background you provided about Angelina, making her a much more solid character and the flashbacks helped the story develop nicely. I was say I was surprised that it ended so quickly, I was expecting Angelina to have to win back Fred's affections but I was glad to see a happy ending. These two deserve it!

Author's Response: Thanks very much for the review. I agree as well about them not getting much attention in canon or fanon, thus why I wanted to write this. Don't worry though, this isn't actually the end of this story, just the introduction. I have more planned for this storyline. 

Reviewer: SophiaMaria Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/02/2007 05:35 PM Title: Being Helpful

Awwww. I'm so glad you updated and finished the story! I loved the part about the twins torturing Harry. And the knickers. And the resolution between them was very sweet. I like the details about her hair - something that's only barely touched on in canon, and adds a touch of reality to the story (don't all women have issues with their hair???). And the slash is George/Lee! Great addition.

Reviewer: oldbookworm Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/01/2007 02:11 PM Title: Being Helpful

OMG did you hear that gasp from Texas? This so good I can’t wait to read the rest of it, it’s just that good.  


Author's Response:


I think everyone just about had Lee's reaction when they read that bit. 

Reviewer: oldbookworm Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/01/2007 11:43 AM Title: Being Helpful

The banter is perfect. I love how well it flows. You did a great job with Lee he is confident but not arrogant. The view of the ally was just right you could see the whole street laid out before you.


Author's Response:

I adore Lee. I am glad that he comes off more charming than arrogant... because really, he's the heart of the piece I think.

*looks forward to what you'll think of the next bits* 

Reviewer: SophiaMaria Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/01/2007 06:52 AM Title: Being Helpful

Ooh!!  That's a fun revelation!  I look forward to the next chapter!

Reviewer: SophiaMaria Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/01/2007 06:46 AM Title: Being Helpful

This I an interesting fic so far. I like stories that have the POV of minor characters like Angelina – providing another view into our favorite main characters and their storyline. And I like that you addressed the racial issues and prejudices in Britain and the wizarding world.  I’m curious to see where the slash comes in.

Author's Response: Thanks for taking the time to read and review this. I really enjoy exploring the POVs of minor characters like Angelina. It helps that I've got years worth of background on her character from when I was massively involved in Role Playing. I do want to address some of the predjudices using her character and this is just really an intro into this story. Thanks again. I'll be updating with the next chapter today.

No results found.
You must login (register) to review.