Date: 04/27/2010 05:39 PM Title: Together Forever
Ok I read a few reviews before I did read the story. I knew it was not going to be a happy ending. I cannot wait to read the next story. It has to work out for them. To be that close and loose their " conection " is just cruel. Our favorite couple have to make it. Anyway good writing. I am loading up the next story ASAP :)
Date: 12/29/2009 01:16 PM Title: Together Forever
Ok let me begin by saying, I have been reading and not reviewing for far too long... AND this story was amazing, it made me laugh out loud, jump in my seat, gasp ... and in all the right places. I read it straight, through even skipping lunch today at work. I am glad you stuck to cannon... truly I am but the ending broke my heart. I feel as the reader, I was slapped in the face. I was so into this story, and I loved it. I am writing this review so that I don't end up hating the story. I mean this is not to bash on you as the writer, please know that I thought you were great!!! It was just that ending. It was like... well it was like reading deathly hallows all over again, but with even less answers. I don't know what exactly I am trying to say other than I loved reading this story but the ending made me fell like I wasted 4 hours doing so.
Firstly, thank you for reviewing, every review means a lot to me :) I'm glad you liked the story and I understand your disappointment in the ending. It was always my intention to bring it back round to canon from when I started writing this story. I wanted to tell a tale of what could be, but what wasn't yet and I wanted to show the frustration we as readers felt but in a bigger way. I know it's probably disappointing for R/Hr shippers but I'm a canon girl and wanted to keep it that way.
I in no way want to blow my own trumpet (except I do a little...lol) but there is a sequel to Together Forever? called Searching and is here on TQP. I think you'll find the ending a little more satisfying with only the smallest of cliff hangers.
Again, thanks for reviewing. Lunabelle :)
Date: 01/02/2009 12:55 PM Title: Searching
Ooh, I thought other chapters were suspenseful, but they've got nothing on this one for drama! Imagine, Hermione hexing herself, even if only to sleep! I'm off to the next one! (And thanks in advance for the quick update, because I think this was my last chapter last night!)
Date: 01/01/2009 07:44 PM Title: Searching
Well, I was happily surprised to find that Ron had a good long think instead of just plunging ahead full throttle! (Although, I suppose I shouldn't have been surprised, should I? A good strategist like Ron would certainly take his time and consider everything before making his move.) Nice work!