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Reviewer: SiriuslyDisturbed Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/13/2006 03:11 PM Title: Taking Control

holy fuck! so hot! dude this story flippin rox!!!!!! man, you need to keep writing like this!

Author's Response: Thanks!  Every once in a while I get inspired.

Reviewer: madam_minnie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/12/2006 01:51 AM Title: Taking Control

“Mine,” he snarls against my lips, wrapping his hand around me.

He jerks my head back, the sharp sensation of my hair being pulled adding to my arousal.  Because you’re a sick and twisted individual.  He feasts on my neck and throat, much like Robbie did but with one-hundred times more fervor.


I so loved this!!! Dom!Ron totally kicks ass!


I lean back against the wall and grin.  I’m sure I’m the poster boy for debauchery at the moment.

“I don’t think I’m confused anymore.”

Ron opens his eyes and stares at me.  I think it startles him and much as it startles me when he breaks into laughter.

“No, you’re not confused.  You’re mine.”


And that's just sheer brilliance! Gah! This was sooo hot! Loved it!!!! 


Author's Response: Thanks!  I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: griffindorstudent Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/11/2006 11:44 AM Title: Taking Control


*giggles madly and runs away*

Author's Response:

This is the one place you hadn't found yet. *laughs*


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