Date: 02/28/2010 12:19 AM Title: Chapter 1
A superb job of capturing the intense but ambivalent sexual interest of early adolescence. Some favorite lines:
"Since earlier that summer, from the first time that he can remember noticing being rigid, Harry was both interested and a bit put off by it."
"Bloody hell, he thought. Why don't I do this more often?"
Date: 06/02/2006 01:57 PM Title: Chapter 1
This was so darn funny and adorable! You did a great job capturing adolescent Harry, more than a boy but not an older teen yet. Perfect!
Poor Harry. I loved your take on Seamus and the other boys too, great job! lol