Date: 06/17/2006 08:35 AM Title: Chapter 1
*Sniffles* Sad, yet life affirming. Even a life wrongly cut short can have great meaning by its end - and by those it touched in its short time.
This was a great story showing a very believable ending to the HP tale. The Patil girls have never really been explored in depth, but I imagine that this is a good insight into the mind of any twin who has lost his or her 'other half'.
Overall, a fine work.