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Reviewer: dumdoc Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/27/2009 06:18 AM Title: Becoming His Own Man

A great story; well written, well developed, and fun to read. Thanks.

Reviewer: jocelynsmama Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/24/2007 08:31 AM Title: Becoming His Own Man

I love how you used the newspaper articles to further the story.  It's so creative, and gives a fresh view of the story.  Keep writing!

Reviewer: robin777 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/29/2007 12:45 PM Title: Becoming His Own Man

That was very cute. I loved the newspaper articles that helped in telling the story.

Reviewer: SillyGillie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/12/2006 09:50 PM Title: Becoming His Own Man

Really cute! I can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: leyla Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/26/2006 08:28 AM Title: Becoming His Own Man

Thats was great but I want more. 

 I loved the way you moved through the story using the newspaper articles at the beginning and end of the story.  It was a nice way to tie everything together. 

Now if I could just find page 3

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