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Reviewer: larry43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/24/2012 01:37 AM Title: Chapter 1

You are a talented writer, very vivid.

Reviewer: Tuktuk3103 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/11/2012 04:19 AM Title: Chapter 1

You portrayed the emotions perfectly but you could have used some spells and potions to make it more magical. After all, this is set in the harry potter universe, not the muggle world.

Reviewer: bluhblah Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/15/2010 05:51 PM Title: Chapter 1

Really disturbing...not sure I should've read it actually, because it's totally not my cup of tea, but it was undeniably haunting and put together quite well. The writing was very good, and I'll probably remember this for a while.

Reviewer: bluhblah Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/15/2010 05:50 PM Title: Chapter 1

Really disturbing...not sure I should've read it actually, because it's totally not my cup of tea, but it was undeniably haunting and put together quite well. The writing was very good, and I'll probably remember this for a while.

Reviewer: iris m Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/22/2008 08:26 PM Title: Chapter 1

omg...this made me want to scream... i hate him in this story, but the story was put together well.

Reviewer: cassiegirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/03/2008 06:15 PM Title: Chapter 1

that was so sad    tears

Reviewer: Reid_Lady Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/16/2008 10:59 AM Title: Chapter 1

This is a very well written and accurate portrayal of the event, but maybe you could warn for non-con in the author's notes at the top.  To come in looking for hanky panky and get rape insteda is really pretty disturbing.

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