Date: 09/03/2009 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 1
I won't pretend that I can understand how 2 women feel about each other heh...
From an objective male point of view that was hot! I'm a hypocrite of course since I wouldn't classify 2 men as hot but hehe... well
The point of their lovemaking was also clear... its not that they're truly bisexual (correct me if I'm wrong) but they love each other for who they are yes?
You did well to bring out their emotions and feelings ... as a reader I say good job!