Date: 10/20/2006 09:30 PM Title: Chapter 1
That was brillant! Loved it, loved it, loved it.
Author's Response: Thanks :). This was my first piece anywhere remotely near erotic, so your review makes me feel a lot better about publishing it!




[Report This]Date: 10/20/2006 08:49 PM Title: Chapter 1
That was hot! :) A big "well done" to my favoritest beta!
Author's Response:
Thanks, man! .:blush:. I only hope my Ron was anywhere near as good as yours is!