Date: 02/11/2009 01:12 PM Title: Chapter 1
Aww that was really good different but good different
Date: 01/11/2009 06:53 PM Title: Chapter 1
That's great
Date: 01/06/2008 11:06 AM Title: Chapter 1
Again, amazingly well written and capturing.
Date: 11/04/2007 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 1
oh that's lovely.
~Q~




[Report This]Date: 11/04/2007 07:14 PM Title: Chapter 1
wonderful! You've really capture the chaos and Ron so very well in this story!




[Report This]Date: 10/22/2006 07:17 PM Title: Chapter 1
“I—It was scary and now it’s not, and…I just need a minute. To adjust. Before I see him and have to be scared all over again.”
yes! it's great how you really capture the fragmented feel of the chaos and worry.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! It's great to know that that came across. :)




[Report This]Date: 10/22/2006 11:59 AM Title: Chapter 1
Oh, lovely, lovely, The spare, sparse language, chaotic, fragmented -- Ron!
Lovely.
Author's Response: Thank you! It felt pretty chaotic to write. :)