Date: 12/13/2008 05:37 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Final Fantasy
omg this was so good.
it was well writen and gad a good feel all the way thru, i must say chapter 3 was by fay the best.
harry was wonderful. i loved the story and im looking foward to the next story.
Author's Response: Awe, thanks! I'm so happy you liked it. I hope the rest live up to your expectations.
Date: 10/30/2008 02:04 AM Title: Chapter 3 - Final Fantasy
Wonderful! I'm very impressed with how you could have these two engaged in these kinds of fantasies and yet maintain their true essence from the books. The last one was fantastic!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked that one. Some people thought it was out of character for Hermione but I think she would try it whether she ever did it again, who knows but she would try it at least. Thanks for the review!
Date: 01/30/2008 08:42 PM Title: Chapter 1-- The Journal
Hi... I found your stories on Jen_Liz's rec list over at LiveJournal. And I read Traditions first. I thought it was wonderful!!! R/Hr is my OTP and love stories about thm finally getting it together. I thought the Magical Botanicals was a brilliant idea and then the proposal was at the end was such a great tie in.... such a creative idea. I loved the humor in in the story too and the depiction of the commaradory between Ron and Harry and the rest of the Weasley siblings was awesome. The whole thing with Harry describing how great oral sex could be in front of Ginny's brothers was hilarious.
*giggles at the the thought*
Anyway, I've only been reading HP fanfiction for about 3-4 months now... but in that time I've read alot of it. SOme of it has made me laught really hard and some stories have tugged at my heart. But nothing I've read has actually produced real tears like the final installment of Four Days of Fantasies did. I cried real tears after Ron yelled, "MOTHER FU....CHESS". I was just like "Wow". So moving, passionate, intense. Brava Rosepddle....
*runs to add Four Days of Fantasies to rec list*
I also enjoyed the teasing between Harry & Ron when Ron told him about Hermiones escapades.
Can't wait to read Bonded!
Author's Response: WOW! Such a fantastic review! Thank you so much. I'm glad you enjoyed it and I hope you enjoyed Bonded (it's actually my favorite of the series). So please let me know what you think!
Date: 07/17/2007 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 3 - Final Fantasy
I have enjoyed most all your writing till I got to this chapter. In it Hermione seems to be vindictive rather than seductive and I feel that Ron though he likes her bossy would not like a version of Bellatrix in his bedroom, so for every thing else you wrote I can give you 10/10, but for this chapter I'm not even sure if I can give more than 6/10. Sorry but Hermione trying to force him to tell a lie dont wash.
Author's Response: Well, you are certainly entitled to your opinion, but I think you missed what she was trying to do. She was not trying to force him to tell a LIE but to tell what she thought was the TRUTH. It was written very clearly that she was having a hard time doing it, but she was desperate to get what she thought was the truth out of him. To compare what she did to Bellatrix is a bit extreme since she LOVES Ron and was not at all trying to hurt him. I don't think I've ever had anyone read that chapter and see Hermione's actions as sadistic and cruel because that is what Bellatrix is. Ron was enjoying it until he realized that there was a deeper issue. (Believe me, what she was doing is not very painful for a man, more frustrating) However, the fact that you don't like it is fine with me. I know it's not for everyone. I just don't agree with you comparing Hermione to Bellatrix. I still thank you for your review, not every one has to be stellar and not every chapter has to be a fan favorite. I happen to love this story since it's the first one I ever wrote, but I especially love the final chapter.
Date: 07/14/2007 07:17 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Final Fantasy
Oh wow! I waited until I finished Transitions to read this and I just have to say it's absolutely brilliant! You did an amazing job. Now I'm really excited to read Bonded. Well done!
Author's Response: Thank you, I hope you enjoy Bonded!
Date: 12/05/2006 09:46 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Final Fantasy
MY GOD!!!!! THIS WAS AMAZING!!!!!!!!! YOU'VE MASTERED IT. THIS STORY WAS SO HOT AND ROMANTIC AT THE SAME TIME. I LOVE IT!!!! I'VE READ HUNDREDS OF RON AND HERMIONE FANFICS BUT THIS IS PROBABLY THE BEST ONE SO FAR!!!! OMFG!
Author's Response: OMG! THANK YOU! That was such a great review and I thank you for it.. I'm all a twitter now-LOL. I hope you come back and read my new story and I hope it doesn't dissapoint.
Date: 12/04/2006 04:14 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Final Fantasy
Greeeaat work!! You works brilliant!!
Beautiful!! I want more of your brilliants fics!!
I'll be waiting!! o
Author's Response: Thank you so much! There shouldn't be too long of a wait depending on if it is approved. If it is, I expect it should be up before x-mas!
Date: 12/04/2006 08:11 AM Title: Chapter 3 - Final Fantasy
I really, really, really enjoyed reading this story.
It's a very well done work! I really loved. And I have to say, I had so much fun trying to picture Harry and Ginny in a broom. OMG!
And I have to admit, this third chapter was brilliant, especially because of the way Ron proved Hermione that he trust her! o/ I was really glad for that. Maybe Mrs. Weasley (I dream about that!) needs to understand and accept what people say about her instead of try to prove fer point. Hermione, sometimes, knows how to be stupid... and I'm not talking about your Hermione at all. In fact, your Hermione is so different and so grace... haha... I really laughed when I realized how she was dressed... funny!
So... amazing work! Amazing... Now, I'm really anxious to read your next story!
Sucess to you!
Bye! See ya!
Thanks for such a great review! I hope you will tune in for my next story, if it is approved, it should be up soon. Thansk again!