Date: 07/12/2008 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 1
it's really a great story. good job. i love it.




[Report This]Date: 12/04/2006 08:27 PM Title: Chapter 1
that was really lovely- I especially liked the solution of looking in his eyes. What a sweetie!




[Report This]Date: 11/14/2006 02:39 PM Title: Chapter 1
That was so beautiful. I really loved the part about his eyes.
Date: 11/06/2006 01:45 AM Title: Chapter 1
Very sweet and lovely!




[Report This]Date: 11/05/2006 04:55 PM Title: Chapter 1
That was lovely and very moving.