Date: 12/13/2006 02:56 PM Title: Northern Front
oh i liked it! bleak.
and the outside observer angle was cool.
Author's Response: Thanks. It's always a challenge to write from not a main character POV, so I'm glad it worked.




[Report This]Date: 12/12/2006 10:04 PM Title: Northern Front
*claps* that was lovely!
Author's Response: Thanks.




[Report This]Date: 12/12/2006 04:08 PM Title: Northern Front
What an interesting perspective. I like how he (she) is uncomfortable at the end, but not judgemental. Would like to know more about this person, but this does stand on it's own.
Author's Response: Thanks. This is an idea that I don't think will be developed further, but I won't rule it out.




[Report This]Date: 12/12/2006 10:34 AM Title: Northern Front
That was very nice. Someone on the outside could interpret it as cheating.
Author's Response: Thanks. I didn't originally intend for the Trio overtones, but my muse demanded it.