Date: 01/09/2007 12:34 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Not Long Enough
Uh! O.O
I must say that your story is haunting me every day (in a good way of course ^^). I just can't stop thinking about what happened with Harry. It's so unlike him. Can't see Potter as a murder (even if I don't like him all that much!).
So, this third chapter was even more intriguing and now it seems to me that something is going really wrong with Harry. I could never imagine that Ron would fear Harry in any way! O.O
And I pity Harry. I could felt his sorrow! Poor man! I hope he has nothing to do with all this mess. I really believe that he was hexed or something like that. It's not possible that someone can act that way being aware of its own atitudes!
Ok! I'm going to far! Sorry! Very nice work and now even more curious!
Good chapter! =)
Author's Response: Wow! I'm glad the story is haunting you in a good way...and you don't like Harry all that much??? (Excuse me while I gasp and fall to the floor in a dead faint!- For Shame!) Just kidding, you can like or moderately dislike anyone you want. I personally am a huge fan of Ron, but I like Harry very much. And I really almost hate for you to read chapter 4 if you have been haunted by the story thus far. I'll just give you fair warning, it get's more disturbing! So you have to let me know what you think when you've finished reading it. Thanks for the great review! Chapter 4 will be up soon.
[Report This]Date: 01/05/2007 09:22 PM Title: Chapter 3 ~ Fear
This chapter was really good. I like how Ron came clean with Hermione but Harry is struggling. I can understand Ginny being angry with Harry.
Author's Response: Thank you for the review! To me, Harry always struggles with letting people in because he doesn't want to be a burden and I think that would carry over even in his married life. I think he will change that at some point...maybe by the end of this fic, who knows-lol.
Date: 01/05/2007 08:13 PM Title: Chapter 3 ~ Fear
Good chapter. I went back and read the second one again, to see if Harry was hexed or posioned or something, but I'm still in the dark. But I love a mystery, so am willing to wait for more clues. I really enjoyed the dialogue among the characters. And count on Hermione to go into research overdrive. The final scene with Ginny and Harry curled up together was very sweet.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review! You'll pick up on what's happening to Harry in the next chapter and if not, then definetly by chp 5 so never fear :-) I love writing dialogue and I really like writing intimate moments between the four characters, so thanks again. Chapter 4 shouldn't be too long.
Date: 12/27/2006 09:26 PM Title: Chapter 2 - An Excessive Use of Force
I haven't figured out Harry's OOC behavior, so I guess I will have to wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: There are clues to his ooc behavior but I'm sure things will become more clear to you in the next 2 chapters. Thanks for the review! Chapter 3 should be up soon.
Date: 12/26/2006 09:58 AM Title: Chapter 2 - An Excessive Use of Force
Wow!
Very nice chapter! Can't wait to read more! Very nice work ... And I'm even more intrigued!! Harry Potter... a murder?? Oh! O.O
See ya!
Author's Response: Thank you, and you will have to wait and see what will happen to Harry next :-o
[Report This]Date: 12/24/2006 08:44 AM Title: Chapter 2 - An Excessive Use of Force
Wow. That is really good. I cannot wait to read more.
Author's Response: Thank you, chapter 3 should be up soon.
[Report This]Date: 12/23/2006 01:38 AM Title: Chapter 2 - An Excessive Use of Force
Whoa...That really took an interesting turn....
Cant wait for more!
Author's Response: Thank you, hope you enjoy the next few chapters!
[Report This]Date: 12/22/2006 07:38 PM Title: Chapter 2 - An Excessive Use of Force
That was really good. I'm thinking the woman in the cafeteria did something to him.
I loved Hermione's reaction to the woman flirting with Ron. I also liked Ron putting the strand of hair behind Hermione's ear.
You defintely have me interested and I can't wait to find out what happens next.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review. Chapter 3 will be up in the new year, hopefully and it should give you some answers or maybe more questions :-o
[Report This]Date: 12/16/2006 06:49 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Not Long Enough
very interesting idea. i'm looking forward to the rest. keep up the good work
Author's Response:
Thank you, Chapter 2 will be up soon and I hope I don't lose any of you because of the events set to take place in it, but it all has a purpose! Thanks again,
Karen
Date: 12/15/2006 08:20 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Not Long Enough
I really enjoyed your "Four Days of Fantasy" story, but I am absolutely loving this! I'm adding it to my favorites. I particularly liked the interaction between Harry and Hermione, and I appreciate how you are portraying Ron as confident and capable. Keep up the good work, and update soon!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I love writing Harry and Hermione interacting like that. I worried about it in FDoF because I didn't want it to be OOC but I think it would become natural for them to form that type of bond after the war. I like to write funny situations as I usually make people laugh in real life but the trick is finding a place that it will be appropriate. Thanks again for the great review, chpt 2 will be coming soon!
Karen
[Report This]Date: 12/15/2006 05:55 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Not Long Enough
Lovely first chapter...
I loved the dynamic between Harry, Hermione and Ron... most post Hogwarts fics ahve them get married and live like 2 couples who meet over brunch every week... am glad you kept them as a trio inspite of being couples...
Cant wait for an update
Author's Response:
I have read fic's like that too and although I plan to greatly intertwine the four of them in later chapters, the Trio will still be strong and I will show the strenght of each couple as well as each individual...at least I hope I can pull it off-lol.
Thanks for the review! I will try to get chapter 2 up before the holiday but no promises :-)
[Report This]Date: 12/15/2006 11:58 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Not Long Enough
enjoyed this chapter very much. anxious to see more.
Author's Response: Thank you! I will try to have chapter 2 up soon.
[Report This]Date: 12/15/2006 05:45 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Not Long Enough
Yes! I am trully happy! Finally this sequel. o/ And I'm so much more happy because it seems to be a very wonderful mistery around us now!
I really enjoyed this first chapter! Há... obviously Harry as a intruder was too much for me. I almost wanted to kill him... hehe... but really I am very interested in this Red Dark Mark. Why red? Now I'm over curious!! hihihi...
Well, very nice work! Waiting, patiently, for the next chapter!
Very well done! o/
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Author's Response:
Thank you for the great review! Yes the red Dark Mark is very interesting...but I'm afraid you will have to wait a while to discover the meaning behind it. I hope to have the next chapter to you soon! Thanks again,
Karen
[Report This]Date: 12/15/2006 04:16 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Not Long Enough
What a wonderful beginning. I loved the teasing and the bickering between Harry and Hermione. That is one thing that I would love to see in the books.
Author's Response: Thank you! Yes I too hope to see more of a sibling relationship from Harry and Hermione in the upcoming book, however, I doubt we will. I felt it was okay to do it in this fic and not have it be OOC. For some reason I feel like if the war was over and Harry and Hermione (two of the most up tight characters in the series) could finally relax then they would start to behave in a more comfortable way around each other. If you think about it, in the books, both characters are quite funny at times. Thanks again for the review!