Reviews For Click... Whirr...
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Reviewer: melakem Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/11/2009 02:18 PM Title: Chapter 1

Nicely done.  I especially liked Ron seeing that Hermione was awake, but not mentioning it to Harry.  And the Click...Whirr of the machines was a nice reminder that we were in a muggle hospital room.  Hospitals seem so quiet, but, spend the night alone in a room, and you realize how many small noises there are in the background of the general hush.

Reviewer: danny Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 12/23/2006 01:24 AM Title: Chapter 1

This was a nice trio story.  I liked how Ron and Hermione didn't let on that she was awake.  This was my fav line:

<i>You know she doesn't leave my side.</i>



Author's Response:

Ah yes, how I love a slightly possessive Ronald Weasley. Glad you like it. Thanks for the review :D

Reviewer: robin777 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/22/2006 08:06 PM Title: Chapter 1

That was really good. The conversation between Hermione and Harry was wonderful.


Author's Response: Thank you, the aim of the whole thing wsa to get an angsty 'you won't get rid of us' conversation between the two of them. Glad you enjoyed it! :D

Reviewer: risiepookie Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 12/22/2006 07:19 PM Title: Chapter 1

Ah, the trio!  How I love the trio!  You very nicely managed to get their personalities and interpersonal dynamics to genuinely come across.  Well done!

Author's Response:

Yes the Trio do rule all! Thank you, I try so hard to get their relationship right, so your comments are much appreciated. :D

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