Date: 02/19/2007 03:21 PM Title: Part I
oohhhhhh, i can not wait until you write the next story! i have read a lot of fanfiction, but this is definately one of my favorite series! Great job combining what JK Rowling told us and what you imagine! I love it and am anxiously awaiting your next story
Date: 02/14/2007 10:48 AM Title: Part I
Oops, I just reread my last review, and I realized how negative it sounded. I meant to say that although I had hoped for more of that part of the story, I could see from the next chapter why you didn't put that in there. And I'm really enjoying the story and look forward to the next chapter!
Date: 02/07/2007 12:25 PM Title: Chapter 6
I'm still loving this story. I was a bit disappointed in chaper 5 because the part where your story converges with Prisoner of Azkaban went so quickly - I'd been looking forward to reading about Remus's experiences in meeting Harry again, interacting with him, and in meeting up with Sirius again. You seemed to rush through it so quickly, and I wondered why we didn't get more of Remus's reaction to seeing Sirius's name on the map, his reaction to seeing him again, his realization about his innocence, etc. But Chapter 6 got more into his feelings about Sirius and his reactions to his reappearance, and we finally got to see their reunion, delayed as it was, so I'm happy. I look forward to more!
Date: 01/18/2007 06:57 AM Title: Part II
This is so well done. I love your perspective on how Remus's life might have been back then when he'd lost everything. And your flashbacks to his time with James, Lilly and Harry are very sweet. I look forward to reading more and seeing where you take this!