Date: 09/19/2009 12:11 PM Title: Chapter 1
Oh that was quite nice, and quite different. Your characterizations are as adept and dynamic as always. Naturally, I only wish I was able to see the real flowering of their relationship... but I thoroughly enjoyed what you gave us! Thank you for a lovely tale.
Date: 02/08/2009 04:41 PM Title: Chapter 1
Very well defined, well written, and nice to read. Thanks.