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Reviewer: dumdoc Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/24/2009 02:25 PM Title: Second Star To The Right

A nice thoughtful story about love and loyalty. Thanks

Reviewer: luvscharlie Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/29/2007 07:20 AM Title: Second Star To The Right

I love Charlie, and your story is nice.  Maybe a beta next time for comma issues.  It would make your sentences read much better, as there were times when they ran together and I had to go back to make sure I understood what you were saying.  Thanks for writing Charlie.

Reviewer: robin777 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/14/2007 05:33 AM Title: Second Star To The Right

That was lovely.

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