



[Report This]Date: 04/16/2007 01:29 PM Title: Surprise
Awww. This was so sweet.
So Ron’s surprise was unparalleled when Harry Potter turned out to be a skinny, lonely, shabbily dressed little thing with broken glasses, wild hair, and frightened eyes.
I love this characterization of Harry. It's spot on, and I love seeing Harry through other people's eyes - especially his Ron's eyes.
Harry had chosen him.
Of course he did! He's his Wheezy!
Nice job!
Author's Response: thanks so much for your kind words! i appreciate how you pointed out what it was you liked the best. thank you very much!




[Report This]Date: 03/21/2007 04:23 AM Title: Surprise
How sweet! Loved this.
Author's Response: thank you so much! i greatly appreciate your comments! :)