Reviews For Wish You Were Here
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Reviewer: Chocolate_Kat Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 09/22/2009 09:13 AM Title: Wish You Were Here

Interesting. Not bad, just short. It has great potential. With a longer write out, like how the school ended up that way. And maybe a separate chapter on Draco’s view. You can have your readers slipping farther into your story; then this abrupt in and out of emotion.

Reviewer: dumdoc Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/20/2009 08:58 AM Title: Wish You Were Here

BAH

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