Date: 08/27/2007 07:16 PM Title: Chapter 1
Really good story. Lots of fun. My favorite line was just a throw-away, "Just mulling over the moment of decreased fame, thanks!" but it was right in the character. Good job!
Author's Response: Thanks, that line is my favorite as well; however, I don't know exactly what a "throw-away" is.
Date: 04/02/2007 01:11 PM Title: Chapter 1
Oh, very cute. I especially liked Hermione being so frazzled getting ready, Ron being hesitant and needing a push from Harry and then the confrontation with Lavender. Well done!
Author's Response: Thank you. I thought about how Hermione was nervous before her "date" with Viktor and I knew she would go nearly insane before a date with Ron. I was going to have Hermione confront her, but then I thought better. Ron was easier to write in his confrontation with Lavender, because I knew he would be straight to the point. I'm glad you enjoyed this.
Date: 03/31/2007 01:20 PM Title: Chapter 1
Oh gosh, where do I start? How about I LOVE this!! You did such a great job and this is just how I think it should happen. I think you hit the characterizations spot on and JKR would be happy with this date!
Author's Response: WOW! Thank you so much. This was my first attempt at any story...of any kind (sad seeing as I want to be a writer). Thanks for such positive feedback.