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Reviewer: weasleymum Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/09/2007 12:50 PM Title: Betrayal

That was incredible!  I'd love to read more...to see the long road Ron and Hermione would have to take to find their way bsck to each other.  Please write more!

Author's Response: Thanks very much - it's great how much postive response this story is generating, as I really enjoyed writing it. At the moment I'm contemplating writing a companion piece, but it depends how my time management works out.

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Date: 04/09/2007 12:49 PM Title: Betrayal

That was incredible!  I'd love to read more...to see the long road Ron and Hermione would have to take to find their way bsck to each other.  Please write more!

Reviewer: kerosinkanister Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/09/2007 12:30 AM Title: Betrayal

I can't say I see canon Ron ever being capable of cheating but I'm glad your Hermione didn't just quickly forgive him.  It seems like they both need to sort stuff out, if their fight was bad enough for Ron to sleep with someone else.  Maybe they're better off apart.

Author's Response: I didn't think Ron would be that kind of guy either, but that got me to thinking about what might push him to do it. And of course I knew that Hermione would probably never be able to forgive him, because she's such a strong character - they both are. You're right, the fight would have been huge to reduce them to that.

Reviewer: risiepookie Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 04/08/2007 09:12 PM Title: Betrayal

Oh, this was so, so heart-wrenching! 

I admire you being able to leave it ending this painful and sad.  I write a lot of angst, but there's always such a strong urge to leave some hope at the end.  Still, it's so powerful that you didn't, but just stayed with the pain.

Well done!



Author's Response: Thanks - I was so tempted just to give it a happy ending, but then I realised that I would be going against my nature if I did! Call me strange, but for some reason I just like to cause my characters grief. I'm sure this probably points to some underlying psychological problem...

Reviewer: TaMara Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/08/2007 08:19 PM Title: Betrayal

Ok, I have to know what happens next because this isnt the end right?

Will she forgive him?  Will she leave?  Try to move on?  With someone else?



Author's Response:

Thanks for what I assume is quite a positive review of the story! I hadn't really thought about adding anything to it, but quite a few people have been wanting to know what happened before/after this scene, so I'm now thinking about it quite hard!

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