Date: 04/15/2007 01:51 PM Title: One
Funny! And very well constructed. Usually I don't like stories that flip around like this. Too often they come off as contrived. But this one really worked and George's voice was consistant throughout, just like he was actually telling the story.
Thanks for a good read!
Author's Response: I'm so pleased to hear the jumbled narrative worked...I hadn't really intended for it to go this way...George sort of insisted! Glad it sounds like him, too! I had a blast writing this...so cool that you enjoyed it so! Thanks very much for reading and for the wonderful comments!