Date: 06/26/2007 09:02 PM Title: Chapter 8 Projects and Positive Associations
This chapter was great! You covered a lot of ground, and I really like Hermione laying claim to Ron. Looking forward to more, but am sorry it's going to end soon.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review. Yes, only two more chapters left, but I hope you like them...after all, it's not the end, but the begining!
[Report This]Date: 06/26/2007 07:37 PM Title: Chapter 8 Projects and Positive Associations
oh, forgot to say that my favourite bit was the in-trio ribbing and friendly banter. lovely trio friendship.
Q
Author's Response: Thank you, I love writing them that way.
[Report This]Date: 06/26/2007 07:36 PM Title: Chapter 8 Projects and Positive Associations
i really like the transition (snicker) from all respectful caution to 'i love you bum'.
and grabbing crookshanks just made me chortle!
Q
Author's Response:
Yeah, Ron is getting comfortable with his girl...he gets even more comfortable in the next two chapters! Thanks for the review.
[Report This]Date: 06/26/2007 06:11 PM Title: Chapter 8 Projects and Positive Associations
:D <3 !!!!!! <-- is about all that I can think
Author's Response: Not quite sure what that means...but I think it's good, so thank you! LOL.
[Report This]Date: 06/26/2007 05:33 PM Title: Chapter 8 Projects and Positive Associations
Ohhhhh you can feel the tension between them mounting faster and faster..... Can't wait for the *explosion*
Brillaint and sexy and everything love and lust should be!
Author's Response: Thw explosion is coming soon! Hope you find it...explosive! LOL. Thanks for your review.
Date: 06/23/2007 01:14 AM Title: Chapter 7 ~ Public Displays
This story is great just like your others, I keep checking back for chapter 8 and it isn't there I can barely wait.
Author's Response: I'm sorry, chapter 8 is with my beta. She promised it to me before the weekend is out so I'm thinking I'll have it up by the middle of the week. Thank you for the review!
Date: 06/13/2007 08:07 PM Title: Chapter 7 ~ Public Displays
This just gets sweeter with each chapter. I cracked up at Mr. W's comment about his next grandchild being conceived against a tree! And Bill's a good big brother, giving Ron advice. Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Thank you! I so happy that you enjoyed it. Chapter 8 is coming up soon.
[Report This]Date: 06/13/2007 05:55 PM Title: Chapter 7 ~ Public Displays
awesome story...you're a great author!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review and for the complement. I hope you enjoy the rest.
[Report This]Date: 06/09/2007 04:31 PM Title: Chapter 7 ~ Public Displays
I know I've told you this before, but this story is your best yet ... keep writing like this and you'll be calling it a career rather than a hobby!
Author's Response: Awe! You know I luv ya! And I think WE have a fabulous career ahead of us! Thank you for the review and for the lovely complements.
[Report This]Date: 06/09/2007 04:26 PM Title: Chapter 7 ~ Public Displays
Hi!
Oh what a beautiful chapter! I had so much fun reading it, even though I didn't believe Ron and Harry were really having a row! Great!
Well, the second date was so well written... everything! Especially their... intimate moment! Love when you write them! ^^ Not to mention the snog session outside The Burrow! hehe...
And about the last part... well, it was so tender reading the way Ron is protective about Hermione. She could not have fallen for any other guy! He's so perfect... *sighs*
Thanks for this great chapter! It made my day!
Kisses!
See ya! o/
Author's Response:
You give such lovely reviews, thank you so much. I was worried about putting in that row with Ron and Harry but then I felt that it was logical that Ron would feel that way, so I'm happy I added it. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Hope you like what's next.
[Report This]Date: 06/09/2007 01:10 PM Title: Chapter 1 ~ Nightmares
I want to congratulate you on an excellent story! It's made me both laugh and cry (seriously, tears were running down my face when I read Ginny and Harry's conversation about the house). And that first date was fantastic! I think the characterizations are spot on and I love how you've involved the Weasley family.
I'm a little confused how Daphne is going to impact the long run, but I trust you'll get there in good time!
You are excellent at writing passion--as in, scenes that contain smut, but are so much more engaging because the reader can feel the characters' strong emotions. Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Thanks you so much for such a wonderful review! It never cease to amaze me when a reader is moved to tears because of something I wrote. It's the ultimate complement to a writer, so thank you. Hope you enjoy the rest!
[Report This]Date: 06/09/2007 11:21 AM Title: Chapter 1 ~ Nightmares
I want to congratulate you on an excellent story! It's made me both laugh and cry (seriously, tears were running down my face when I read Ginny and Harry's conversation about the house). And that first date was fantastic! I think the characterizations are spot on and I love how you've involved the Weasley family.
I'm a little confused how Daphne is going to impact the long run, but I trust you'll get there in good time!
You are excellent at writing passion--as in, scenes that contain smut, but are so much more engaging because the reader can feel the characters' strong emotions. Keep up the good work!
[Report This]Date: 06/08/2007 10:50 PM Title: Chapter 7 ~ Public Displays
I'm really enjoying this story. I look forward to more updates. Great work!
Author's Response: Thank you! Chapter 8 will be up as soon as I can get it...thanks!
[Report This]Date: 06/08/2007 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 6 ~ The Date
This is the PERFECT first kiss for R/Hr! WOW!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. I hope you like chapter 7 as well.
[Report This]Date: 06/08/2007 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 7 ~ Public Displays
“I think I should say that to her before I say it to you,”
Oh my gosh, this is one of the best lines I have ever read. Dang I want a guy to say that about me!
Oh I love this story, and your R and Hr. Getting caught by the tree was so funny. Ron really let Harry have it didn't he?
Update soon, soon, soon! I will be waiting!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for the review. I loved that line too. Somehow I feel like Ron would say something like that because he'd be too shy to sit around and gush, but he'd want to so badly, he's just not secure enough yet. Chapter 8 will be going to beta soon...hope you like it.