Date: 04/26/2007 06:51 PM Title: Chapter 1
Very nice. You handle the chaging POVs well, and I like the way you get into each characters head.
Thank you - i did find the POV shifting hard at first, im terrible with time - but m glad it panned out well
Date: 04/26/2007 03:09 PM Title: Chapter 1
"I'm all dirty, and now you're all clean. Sharing water with me could make you dirty, too."
I totally imagine her saying this in all sincerity, but with a glint in her eye...What a classic line
I thought this was an excellent look at the guilt and the tension an act of killing would bring about in the Trio. All the characters were really well portrayed, and the friendship was tangible. Great job.
Yay a review - thank you... i spose it helped watching a noir type of film at the time.
Thank you for your knid words - Im smiling now on what should be a terrible day - hope u look out for a follow-up im writing