Reviews For Unexpected Smiles
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Reviewer: madam_minnie Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/19/2007 03:55 PM Title: Chapter 1

Very hot! Great imagery and great work on keeping the characterizations spot-on despite the OOC situation. Beautifully done!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked it and your comment about my imagery made me extra happy because I'm always a bit nervous about those bits in my stories.

Reviewer: theelderwyrm Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/28/2007 09:06 AM Title: Chapter 1

That was a pleasant little interlude.  It would have been nice to see the flirting and encouragement that led to Hermione thinking she could move on to the point of seduction.  I did particularly like the line, 'There were limits and she absolutely didn't want Harry and Ron wanking to the image of her and Pansy Parkinson fucking.'  Very appropriate and added a bit of a glimpse into their group relationship.

The Elder Wyrm 

Author's Response: Your review made me smile. Both because I remember your name from my earlier fandom days and because I'm glad you liked it and offered me a bit of constructive criticism. Thank you.

Reviewer: pettybureaucrat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/10/2007 02:53 PM Title: Chapter 1

*pants and drools*  It ended too soon!  I sooooo wanted to read what Pansy did to Hermione!  Steamy hot!

Author's Response: Glad you liked it, even if I didn't include everything. :) Thanks!

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