Date: 11/19/2007 03:55 PM Title: Chapter 1
Very hot! Great imagery and great work on keeping the characterizations spot-on despite the OOC situation. Beautifully done!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked it and your comment about my imagery made me extra happy because I'm always a bit nervous about those bits in my stories.
Date: 10/28/2007 09:06 AM Title: Chapter 1
That was a pleasant little interlude. It would have been nice to see the flirting and encouragement that led to Hermione thinking she could move on to the point of seduction. I did particularly like the line, 'There were limits and she absolutely didn't want Harry and Ron wanking to the image of her and Pansy Parkinson fucking.' Very appropriate and added a bit of a glimpse into their group relationship.
The Elder Wyrm
Author's Response: Your review made me smile. Both because I remember your name from my earlier fandom days and because I'm glad you liked it and offered me a bit of constructive criticism. Thank you.