Date: 11/03/2008 04:08 PM Title: Chapter 1
I love this. A good clear plotline, long enough to be enjoyable but not short enough to be boring, and an interesting plot twist. Served with a generous helping of erotica as well. Good work!
Author's Response: thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 02/26/2008 04:45 PM Title: Chapter 1
Hot but very sweet too. Harry's naivete and innocence surely did appeal to Katie, as well as his -- ahem -- family jewels! Would like to see more Harry-Katie fanfic!
Author's Response: Thank you. I've always thought that Quidditch got the hormones flowing and, well, Katie is proof of that. Thanks for reading.
Date: 06/12/2007 07:34 AM Title: Chapter 1
DAMN! That was HOT! Totally tantalizing! I may have to go back and write some more on my own stuff now that I'm so tingly and in the mood! I love Harry all innocent and naive. This was like The Graduate, but better. Good Work!!
Author's Response: Thank you, glad you enjoyed it. I wrote it for the Erotic Elves Porn for Everyone 'open season' if you will. I'm toying with a follow up. I figured where better for Harry to get an intro to sex than the Quidditch lockers?