Date: 08/14/2007 09:10 AM Title: Chapter 1
*sighs* wow, that was a really tough read. Poor Hermione, not being able to read, I hope she recovers. The beginning and her behaviour made me kind of restless and I just had to read on to see if it gets better; fortunately it does so thank you! Ron's just awesome, he's so kind and caring.. mind if I borrow him? ;-) Please write a sequel! Cheers from Missy ♥
Date: 08/13/2007 01:12 PM Title: Chapter 1
I really enjoyed this, not only because of it's orginality, but the portrayal of Hermione and Ron and the way they try to deal with the stresses of her reaction to her disability.
I love that Ron tried to make sure that she was defended from his mother, but also didn't coddle her when she needed to be told that she was being a prat cause sometimes when you are in pain, you take it out on others.
I especially loved the conclusion. Hermione Granger, the brightest most brilliant witch of her time, accepts help from the man who loves her.
Date: 08/12/2007 08:24 PM Title: Chapter 1
This is just perfect and heartbreakingly real. This should have been Hermione's boggart really...
I love how you portrayed Ron and his love: patient and understanding but not coddling. I also love how you developed Hermione's character, how she had to be broken before she could rise above her disability.
This is really great! I can't seem to stop gushing!