Date: 08/12/2007 09:57 PM Title: Chapter 1
This is absolutely hilarious. The way you've written Ron's wizard reactions to Muggle Santa - it's perfect. One of the things I've always loved in Rowling's books is how she writes Arthur's reactions to Muggle inventions and you have captured that perfectly. It's exactly what Ron would say about Santa. And I love that he thinks it's creepy - a drunken stranger in the Floo network! I laughed out loud.