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Reviewer: Concupiscence Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/05/2009 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 1

Excellent turn of phrase:       "...thrashing armful of wet angry hero..."

Great Metaphor and delicious visual:  

  "They snarled and glared and did another shot, and while Viktor was pouring Ron Bad Decision #26 they started to creep towards one another. Slowlike."

 

I was trying really hard not to avalanche you with comments, but I just loved those bits so much my restraint failed.  Massive Restrainment Fail.

 

 loved it..

Reviewer: Aethonan Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/16/2009 01:38 PM Title: Chapter 1

This has got to be one of the most entertaining and wonderful stories I've read!  I LOVE how you told the whole Harry/Draco thing without ever focusing on them.  And Viktor... HOT!  The whole thing.  Just, well... I think I need to go turn the fan on.  Whew!

Reviewer: jocelynsmama Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/08/2008 05:01 PM Title: Chapter 1

FREAKIN' FABULOUS!!!!

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