Date: 08/26/2007 09:00 AM Title: Quiet Comes the Dawn
Aw, that was brilliant! Such a wonderful trip into the minds of the Trio. You get the characterisations just right and, most importantly, you remain true to them in how you show their responses to the developing situation.
There were several lovely moments here to remember, the Hermione/Ron collision being the funniest. I also liked the various 'voices' of his inner monolouge. It was funny that he should have a mischief voice that sounded like Fred... unless Fred really was there, looking out for his favorite investor and silent partner.
I'm not usually a canon pairing fan, preferring H/Hr. However, this is an impressive work so far so I will be looking out for more of this story.