Date: 08/30/2007 07:19 PM Title: This Submerged Sense of Wonder
Wow, what a wonderful, beautiful story. Lovely characterizations of the boys, and of their relationship with Hermione. Poor Neville....
As usual, you give beautiful attention to detail and create wonderful imagery. Lovely!
Author's Response: Many thanks for your kind words! I did feel badly for Hermione and Neville, but tragedy is unfortunately an element of life at times. I'm so pleased that you enjoyed it and the imagery. Thank you so much for reading and letting me know your thoughts!
Date: 08/29/2007 08:34 AM Title: This Submerged Sense of Wonder
So very beautiful! I think I've said this to you before. But I just adore how well you weave in the little things of daily life into your stories. The simple little things that mean so much. Two bodies fitting together. The pain of realization that something is slipping away. The love and urgency in helping to rebuild something. And the first steps of realization about self.
Author's Response: I am so pleased that you enjoyed this, and your comments about the interweaving of the more mundane aspects to life makes me so happy. I do like to feel that I can capture real life, in its glory, sadness, and the mundane stuff, too. Thank you so much for reading, and for sharing your generous thoughts.