Date: 09/15/2007 05:33 AM Title: Chapter 1
I love this! So sweet, and a very believable lead-in to anything that might happen down the road.
I hope you'll consider making it into something multi-chaptered that goes from an "FG" rating to something that would make "NC-17" sizzle . . . wink, wink, hint, hint.
Date: 09/14/2007 11:37 AM Title: Chapter 1
I really like this. This pairing, especially in this moment is really delicate and hard to pull off, but you've definitely succeeded. I love these lines: "I mean, it's not like I'm…" He trailed off. It's exactly what I would expect from Ron. Along with the fact that he recognizes that he still likes Hermione... There's nice complexity there. Thanks for this, Emma!