Date: 09/18/2007 10:38 AM Title: Chapter 1
Loved the way you used Ron & Hermione's banter to highlight the back and forth, give and take nature of their relationship. She pushes him to try harder and he encourages her to laugh and relax. The title fit the piece perfectly.
Always enjoy your writing and hope to see more R&H from you soon.
Date: 09/17/2007 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 1
*pants and drools* Wow. What can I say other than that was hot! And sexy. And erotic. And did I say hot? And is this the same Hermione as in 'Expanding my Skill Set?' If so, double wow! Talk about the best of both worlds!