Date: 12/31/2009 12:19 AM Title: Chapter 1
Just read this one again. Really lovely. I love how you convey the intimacy between them, and the backstory with just a few words. Only one note: "a soft sound like the backfire of a car"? I never thought of a car backfiring as a soft sound! No matter, perhaps I missed the irony!
Loved the tale, as I do all of yours.
Date: 09/25/2007 07:17 PM Title: Chapter 1
Ok I loved it at the challenge and I still love it now! and this is still my favorite line:
Instinctively Harry lifted his hand and clamped it over Ron’s mouth, cutting off the sound and his other arm clamped tight around his chest, holding his heaving body pressed against his own
OMG! *falls over dead*
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