Date: 10/21/2007 06:43 PM Title: Chapter 1
I am completely enthralled by this piece. It's haunting tone, the delirium that Ariana experiences, the reasons why she's a tortured soul are all so vivid in this piece, that it brings tears to my eyes.
You've given me a glimpse into the life of a character whose life and death changed the lives of many and what a fantastic job you've done at it! Wow!
Egad, thanks so much! I was kinda sad that nobody read it--I was thinking the character listing along with the warnings may have scared people off. ;)
Thanks for the ego boost, dear. I really needed it right about now. <3