Date: 06/26/2010 05:27 PM Title: Chapter 1
hi! i really like the way you describe both characters thoughts...do you plan to go on with this plot? or moreover, have you?
cheers from venezuela!
Author's Response: Hi! Thanks for the review! To answer your question, this is actually an outtake from my story "Fate of the Generations." When I wrote 'Fate' I wanted to try and keep it PG-13, but found a couple of places where I wanted to get a bit more romantic (if you know what I mean) and so I wrote a couple of chapter outtakes to go into more detail on Ron and Hermione's relationship. So, if you want, read the whole "Fate of the Generations" and the notes at the top of each chapter will tell you if there is an outtake that you can go and read. Hope you like it. If you decide to read it, send me some notes and let me know, ok? Thanks!!
Date: 08/13/2008 11:11 AM Title: Chapter 1
I can not believe I am writing this but here it goes. Ron's loving, thoughtful approach to intimacy with Hermione was just...I am speechless. I could kiss him! Still a Dramione fan though but we have already to agree to disagree. Amazing chapter! Now back to your story but not today, real life claims me. Good job!
Author's Response: Awww, thanks!! Also, for all the other reviews. I've read them all and hope you continue to enjoy the story.
Date: 10/08/2007 07:35 PM Title: Chapter 1
I'm a certifiable R/Hr first time fic addict, so as you can imagine, I was over the moon to see a new one up here. And you certainly did the topic justice. Lovely job :D
Author's Response: Oh, I love it when I make someone swoon!! Thanks for the review!
Date: 10/08/2007 01:09 PM Title: Chapter 1
Oh that was the most beautiful first time for them ever. Completely realistic with the awkwardness and the exploration and I think most girls can vouch for Hermione's thoughts of uncertainty fighting with her body. Twas just perfect.
Author's Response: Dear charma10, glad to see your name again on a review. I just love R&Hr and their first time. It's one of my favorite topics to think about!! I'm glad you liked it. Hope to hear from you again soon!