Date: 04/11/2009 02:05 PM Title: Chapter 7: Answers
Sigh. I've been folding laundry and reading your stories all afternoon. You make even laundry something enjoyable! I love, love, loved the intimacy between Ron and Hermione in this chapter! The sincerity of their relationship is just so obvious! It's fantastic!
Date: 04/11/2009 01:09 PM Title: Chapter 5: Ginny
Curiouser and curiouser. You certainly do have a way with suspense. And, I must say, I love how much this story deals with relationships, despite the fact that we really only have one character present. Well done.
Date: 04/11/2009 12:57 PM Title: Chapter 3: Arthur
Again with the humor in the midst of something heartfelt! Here I'm feeling all squishy and loving over Arthur's talk with Ron, and suddenly you have him whip out with advice on not puking in your bed! You certainly have a way with knowing just when to cut the tension!
Date: 04/11/2009 12:16 PM Title: Chapter 1: Seeing things
I'm utterly intrigued. So, much so that I forgot to review for the prologue. I'd say that's a big clue that I think you did a great job setting the scene and drawing readers in! (I'm guessing that Ron being so addled is the reason he didn't just Accio his wand. That or the story works better this way. smiling)