Date: 05/05/2008 01:27 PM Title: One: Uneventful
Love the concept--very original. And leave it to Hermione, even at 11, to not be afraid to venture into the wizarding world by herself (or to feel that she was too grown up for birthday parties & presents). Can't wait to read more!
Date: 04/03/2008 03:04 AM Title: Eight: Enemies
I love reading your story and can't wait for the next update! I especially like "Enemies." Poor Hermione, getting her period and meeting the troll all on the same day. Girls haven't changed much, be they witches or Muggles.
Date: 02/17/2008 02:14 AM Title: Four: Acceptance
Hermione as a Harry groupie LOL (oh well, still better than when I think back to my days of Backstreet Boys obsession LOL)
cute chapter, can't wait for more
Author's Response: Hey, better than being a Lockhart groupie. :-J Glad you enjoyed this, thank you for commenting.
Date: 02/16/2008 11:04 PM Title: Four: Acceptance
I am really enjoying this. I hope you keep it up ! I think you write Hermione's voice perfectly...so matter of fact and practical, even at such a young age. Can't wait til she sees Harry and Ron.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Chapter Five ("Hogwarts Express") is being betaed right now, so I'll post it when it's ready.
Date: 12/30/2007 11:28 AM Title: Two: School
Maroon and orange, my too least favourite colours, together.
Author's Response: Heh, that's meant to be ironic, in light of her later feelings for Ron (though those are the canonical Smeltings colours). Thank you for commenting.