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Reviewer: Nicholas Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/19/2013 04:49 PM Title: Prologue: a distance erased

This story is great. Teddy's character is well developed, the plot is solid and the diversion from true canon is well explained. I am impressed.

Reviewer: maryjane Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/07/2010 01:40 AM Title: Chapter 8 - from the ashes

Wow. I did not see any of that coming lol. I thought Teddy would just find the mirror of Erised or speak to some doppelgangers or something, not time travel and bugger everything up. it worked out in the end though so it's all good, but that was still rather unexpected.

one thing that bugs me though... Teddy and Cedric hung out in the room of requirement, right? well is that where they were when Lupin found them? because I thought that room didn't show up on the map, so how would he have seen Teddy's name? and if they weren't then where were they?

all in all it was a really good story. I love next gen fics and this was very well written and quite interesting. keep up the good work!


Reviewer: Mamameh02 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/21/2010 11:05 PM Title: Chapter 8 - from the ashes

Such a great story! I passed this story a few times without thinking much--Teddy and Cedric, what a weird pairing!  But I'm glad I listened to the high rating and the enthusiastic reviews; This story is so sweet and really pulls you in.  I wish there was a way to resolve the ending better (don't want to spoil anything for someone who hasn't read yet, but let's just say a large age gap wouldn't be sexy...)

Reviewer: fruitloop Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 05/31/2008 02:45 PM Title: Chapter 8 - from the ashes

Wow I LOVED this.  I even went to you LJ to see if you'd written a sequel, and saw the link for Butterfly Casualties.  It was nice to havesome closer, but I perfer your part in the story.  Anyway, this is getting long, just wanted to say I loved it.  If you ever do any Harry/Cedric (hopefully without Cedric dying), or more Teddy/Cedric I'd LOVE to read it.

Reviewer: SoraKeyes Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/19/2008 02:56 AM Title: Chapter 8 - from the ashes

This story was so intriguing, so wonderful, and so so touching. I wish it could have gone longer, but you ended it responsibly, with room for imagination, and a flair for the 'what the hell' when it came to the fate of everyone present. In all matters of logic, it would be rather funny if Teddy just stayed with Cedric in the past, and then grew up to meet his future self, though whether that could happen.....and whether history would re-alter and all that jazz is not important. What is important is that I'm keeping an eye on you, because you are now one of my favourites and this ship is totally in my top five!

Reviewer: SoraKeyes Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/09/2008 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 5 - strange how we know each other

This is truely brilliant, and is quickly becoming an out of nowhere favourite of mine. I never would have ever concieved this ship, but now I can't help but want more. Continue Continue!!!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  I wrote it for a fic exchange, so I didn't conceive of the pairing myself - the blame for that lies squarely with Tarie, as she was my recipient.  But I'm so glad she gave me the option for such an odd pairing because it was really a joy to write in the end. And I got to play with canon, too!  

The story is finished - 8 chapters plus the prologue - and I'm uploading the last three chapters now :-P

Thanks so much for reading and commenting!

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