Date: 01/17/2008 05:23 PM Title: Longing
You really need to make a piece that addresses how Harry relates to Hermione, after all she is the one who stuck with him through thick, thin and not so sure. And, it would be nice to see the full trio dynamic together. Just a thought. You are a very sensitive writer and it is a pleasure to read your story.
Author's Response: I have one that I plan to write in the near future, but two large series I'm working on are taking up my time. When I write it, it'll be posted here. Thank you for reading!
Date: 01/17/2008 11:09 AM Title: Longing
That was a very nice trio fic without being graphic. Great job.
Author's Response: Thank you! I wanted this to have a gentle feel, and smut didn't fit. However, I did write an "outtake" for this called Bedfellows, which is being approved by the mods as we speak, which was specifically about Ron and Harry's first time, and it's smutty. It just felt better as its own piece.