Reviews For Jack of Hearts
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Reviewer: norwegianeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/05/2008 09:34 AM Title: Chapter 1

duuuude! fic=full of awesome. now i want to ship remus/ron! beautifully written. there were a couple typos, but whatev. what was the point of ***?

Author's Response:

Thanks! Ron/Remus gets me every time...Two of my favorite characters with their shared flaws, foibles and gifts...what could be better!?!?

Typos--like WHOA! I don't think I've read this up here since posting! Thankfully most of them are just layout issues and I can easily fix. Thanks for the heads up!

The *** are there because this is a story told in drabbles and each *** represents another 100 words and different story all telling the same story...


Reviewer: MidnightBlue88 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/15/2008 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 1

<i>The last thing he needed was a knight in shining armor. He was supposed to be the knight.</i>

Oh, I loved that line. I loved ALL of the lines. There were way too many to copy/paste, but so many brilliant phrases and combinations of words. And I loved the atmosphere of the whole fic - I could really feel Ron's guilt and there was such a strong sense of loss and hopelessness throughout. Such a beautiful story.

Author's Response:

Oh, thanks babe!

It was hard for me to hurt Ron as much as I had to to get him to the place where he could match the pain that JKR had put Remus through, but I really enjoyed the payoff of it! I'm glad you did too! Thanks!

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