Date: 04/11/2009 10:58 PM Title: Return to England
whoai just read your story (well parts of it atleast) and I gotta say it's kinda wierd. The way you portrayed Hermione is so ruthless.
You might be a big fan of Harry, but do you even have a slightest of idea of how you have degraded him in this fic. After all its done, he finally gets his life with ginny happily? You are doing a fic in SU called double standards if I am right. the reason you stated that was that it was a rebuttal to som other fic. Well I have read the other fic and your ginny here in this story is a lot worse compared to the 'other' fic. So first clean your own place before pointing fingers at others. I ll say you have know right to write htat kind of rebuttals, if your very own stories are such rubbish.
Date: 06/11/2008 11:37 PM Title: The Honeymoon
wait! what does the letter say!!!????
Author's Response: I mentioned part of what the letter said--that Remus was informing Harry that he wanted to induct him and Ginny into the Order. There's more of what the letter said in the next chapter. Be watching for it!
Date: 06/11/2008 11:32 PM Title: Harry and Ginny's Wedding
before this chappie, ron was in rehab and hated harry's guts. and rose,lily and helen had yet to meet...
so what happened in bewtween chapters?
Author's Response: Harry and Ron reconciled in Chapter 12...the girls met at their parents' wedding in Chapter 13...and there'll be more on how the girls get along in Chapter 15...so as I said in the other response, be watching for it, it's coming up next!
Date: 06/10/2008 07:49 PM Title: Return to England
This isn't a bad story at all, but there is a lot about it that I find somewhat frustrating. The fact that everyone(including the Weasley family) seems to have forgiven Harry, without him having made even the slightest attempt to apologize to Ron makes it seem like no one even gives a damn that he betrayed Ron so badly. When people say to Harry "Molly forgave you, so Ron will too eventually", it almost suggests that Harry won't even have to try to get Ron's forgiveness, which implies that what Harry did to Ron isn't that bad. Afterall, he at last had to make an effort with Ginny.
I'm sure that this isn't an intentional thing but it's kinda aggravating to have these undertones in an otherwise well written story.
Author's Response: I'm glad you like it, even with the frustration you're experiencing. But don't worry, the story's not over yet. Still five chapters to go. With luck, your frustration will end soon.
Date: 06/08/2008 10:42 PM Title: Ginny Meets Harry’s Girls
Author's Response: Don't worry, four more chapters are up now--and I'll be sending the last two to my beta shortly. Glad you're enjoying the story and I hope to see more reviews from you on the rest of it.
Date: 06/06/2008 02:38 PM Title: A Day in the Life of Harry James Potter
remus is kind of being an asshole. draco too. oh and hermione. the time period in this fic is kind of weird. i had no idea that 6 months had passed...
Author's Response: Remus is acting like most people would in this situation. He still has affection for Harry but isn't about to just automatically take him back without some indication of his sincerity. Draco has a talent for being an arse, so that's no surprise...and the main reason Hermione approached him was to make sure their girls didn't see anything inappropriate. But the way she treated Harry, it's only natural for him to react as he did to what she said and shoot back that she'd do better to watch her own conduct. As for indicating the passage of time, yes, I suppose that could have been handled better. Will try to keep that in mind after this.