Date: 05/18/2008 02:17 AM Title: Chapter 1
This is a pairing I've never read before, and I think you handled it beautifully. You managed to make it sweet but not saccharine, and the attraction to one another believable with out being OOC. Charlie's calm, unflappable demenour and Draco's prickliness barely covering his fear and uncertainty were subtley and masterfully created. I felt drawn in to this story, and was seduced into believing the plausibility of it, rather than feeling unconvinced, which I think I would have been had it not been developed so well. Excellent work.