Date: 06/03/2008 06:32 AM Title: Chapter 1
This was a great one shot, I don't usually read one shots but I figured why not and I'm glad I did. I wish you'd write a chapter story with this, It really has great potential to be something so much more. I should know I've read a " A LOT" of stories. Keep it up it's great.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and commenting. This was written for an exchange, so I couldn't make it a multi-chapter... and to be honest I find it very difficult to write multi-chaper fics! I might have a go one day. thanks for your suggestion!