Date: 07/20/2008 05:11 AM Title: Cannons 'Til I Die
Hey. I just had to drop a line about a little (funny, in a nice way) mistake in the story. "Ron, remembering he was trying to teach his son not to eat with his mouth full". Right after it you talk about not talking with his mouth full, though. Just thought I'd point that out.
(Of course, for the sake of argument, it is somewhat possible to want to teach a kid to not eat with his mouth full, as in wanting him to eat in a civil way without stuffing his mouth to the brim.)
A nice story, too :))