Date: 01/22/2010 07:11 PM Title: Chapter 1
This story really is very clever. I l liked the fact that you left the reader with as many questions as you answered. I'm going to assume that the whole experience with the doctor WAS Ron's test, and that he passed. But, as I said, I really like that you left so much up to reader interpretation. You did a marvelous job keeping Ron in canon!