Date: 09/17/2008 08:58 AM Title: Spring
Squee! That was lovely! Utterly and completely sweet! I love the proposal.
Lily's dad makes me laugh as much as ever, as does James when he's with her dad. You have a way of capturing his nervousness that just sends me into snickers every time.
Remus saying that Lily was a good kisser and the ensuing conversation were great! I loved the mention of Hagrid, nice touch.
Dumbledore and the revelation of the Order were a reminder of how things turn out, and that was a little bitter, I'm glad you're giving us such insight into the happy parts of their lives to remind us that their lives building up to the end made it all worthwhile.
Date: 07/15/2008 06:51 PM Title: New Year
Another lovely chapter!!!!
Finally James and Lily get what they both want!
It is very sad about James mom, but it is good James has such good friends around to help him. I'm glad that James and Lily resolved the argument and that Sirus was able to help.