Date: 09/15/2010 08:30 AM Title: Waiting In Line
Oh dear, how RON can you get? Absolutely spot-on for all the characters. Well written and just the right amount of angst. Thanks for writing!
[Report This]Date: 06/23/2008 09:35 PM Title: Waiting In Line
That was great! Thank you for this!
FRED!!
Author's Response:
No problem :D I'm glad you liked it.
Yes, Fred... *sigh*
Thanks for reviewing :D
Date: 06/17/2008 06:19 PM Title: Waiting In Line
Lovely... i so enjoy how Hermione manages to comfort Ron.
Author's Response:
Yep, she definitely knows her boy :D
Thanks for reviewing :D
Date: 06/17/2008 05:08 AM Title: Waiting In Line
Oh that was perfect. You really nailed them. Perfect charaterisation and so moving! Well done.
Author's Response:
Thanks mate, I love it when people think my characterisation is right, 'cause it's the thing I work hardest on :)
Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 06/15/2008 09:55 PM Title: Waiting In Line
Lovely. True and heartwarming, and profound.
Author's Response:
Oh! Thank you! I like words like that :D
Thanks for reviewing :D
[Report This]Date: 06/14/2008 04:55 AM Title: Waiting In Line
OMG this is brilliant. This is the first piece of fan ficiton I've read in about 3 weeks and I'm so happy I did. Well done, vivid!
*applauds*
Author's Response: Yay! Thanks Annie :D
Date: 06/11/2008 01:07 PM Title: Waiting In Line
Very touching story. Their interactions are wonderful, and the emotions rendered come across as very real. Nice work!
Author's Response:
Thank you, I wanted the confusion and uncertainty to be the main focus without being over the top or fake, so I'm glad you thought they came across as real. :D
Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 06/11/2008 10:36 AM Title: Waiting In Line
beautiful story - love it
Author's Response: Yay! Very happy you liked it :D
Date: 06/11/2008 07:24 AM Title: Waiting In Line
Really touching. Fred would want to be remembered with a smile.
Author's Response: Thank you, I think he would, too. :D