Date: 05/03/2009 03:28 PM Title: Chapter 1
This is just a lovely, lovely story. I really like the idea of Dudley finding redemption, and you've done it beautifully here, letting him still be Dudley, but a wiser and kinder one than he was starting out as. I can see this as an outgrowth of our last sight of him in DH.
The two cousins heading off toward teh pub together totally warmed my heart. Well-done!